2013高考生必讀：英語(yǔ)作文高分必殺技(2)

第三段為結(jié)尾，簡(jiǎn)化為一句，也是全文的總結(jié)句，它將前面內(nèi)容總結(jié)為一結(jié)果，表明自己的論點(diǎn)。三段之間的連接要靈活運(yùn)用“啟、承、轉(zhuǎn)、合”的連接過(guò)渡手段。例如：

Example 1

Television

Television presents a vivid world in front of us.（1）（主題句） Through TV, we can learn what is happening half way across the world. （2）（擴(kuò)展句）

Television also plays an important educational role in our daily life. （3）（主題句） For one thing, the TV university provides an opportunity for many young men who can not go to formal universities. （4）（擴(kuò)展句） For another, children can broaden their scope of knowledge by watching such popular programs as "The Animal World", and "The Mickey Mouse and Duck Donald". （5）（擴(kuò)展句） Besides, women can learn about the latest fashion of dresses and the best recipe for making fruit cakes. （6）（擴(kuò)展句） Furthermore, we learn many world advanced technologies from TV programs such as computer and telecommunication. （7）（擴(kuò)展句） And also we can learn singing, dancing and doing physical exercises in some special TV training courses. （8）（擴(kuò)展句）In short, the effect of TV's educational role is becoming more and more obvious. （9）（擴(kuò)展句）

Having viewed these several aspects, and with many more TV program produced, I believe that our life will become even more significant. （10）（總結(jié)句） （全文共165個(gè)詞）

Example 2

Changes in People's Diet

There have been some changes nowadays in the diet of the Chinese. （1）（主題句）For example, grain, the main food of most people in China, is now playing a less important role, while the consumption of high-nutrition food such as milk, meat has increased. （2） （擴(kuò)展句）

The changes in diet can be accounted for by a number of factors. （3） （主題句）First, people are much wealthier than before. （4） （擴(kuò)展句） With a higher income, they can afford to buy good foods which, in the past, were rarely seen on the dinner tables of ordinary families. （5） （擴(kuò)展句） Another factor is that people have realized the importance of a balanced diet to their health. （6） （擴(kuò)展句） Lack of certain amount of meat or milk, for example, will result in poor health. （7） （擴(kuò)展句） Finally, owing to the economic reform, meat and milk, which were scarce in the past, are produced in large quantities. （8） （擴(kuò)展句） For all those reasons, what was formerly called "the basket of vegetables" has become that of varied foods. （9） （擴(kuò)展句）

To sum up, insignificant as those changes may seem, they are the signs of the improved economic condition in China, and we believe that as the effort in the modernization movement continues, there will be greater changes in people's diet in the future. （10） （總結(jié)句）

　　(責(zé)任編輯：韓志霞)

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