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　　Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck?

　　When it comes to if lucky numbers can Bring Good Luck to people, opinions differ from person to person. Some person consider that lucky number is useless but psychological implication, others person believe that lucky number can bring good luck to people, for instance they think the number eight can make a fortune. In my opinion, I claim that it hasn't any relation between number with good luck.

　　I believe the adage “no pains ,no gains.”,so we should work or study hard, in aim to get success. When people do things readily,then chance often comes to them. If someone want to achieve succsee, he must devote himself to the thing what he is going to do, with good luck he mostly will succeed.

　　To sum up, I congsider that number hasn”t any relationship with good luck. If someone want to succeed, he must work hardly,then good luck maybe will comes.

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