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　　Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck?

　　Nowadays in china,different people have different ideas on the numbers. some people think  that the “lucky numbers” such as “six” “eight” and “nine” would bring Good luck to them while  the others think the number would do nothing to our fate.

　　In my opinion, the numbers could not decide we were lucky or not, the numbers only a tool in our life,they are only represent a kind of signs. In almost circumstances ,one person must try it’s best to gain the success.  The idea of lucky number bring luck is a mental and physical efforts in fact to some extent.  On the contrary ,if all people make their dream  leave with one or some number ,they would haove nothing finally. So ,we should have the corret understanding ,and  make our effort both in our studies and work .

　　名師點(diǎn)評(píng)：8—9分

　　本文內(nèi)容基本符合題目要求，但是由于文中有較多的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及表達(dá)欠妥當(dāng)?shù)默F(xiàn)象導(dǎo)致分?jǐn)?shù)降低。

　　今后復(fù)習(xí)中一定要注意這些細(xì)節(jié)的復(fù)習(xí)，多看看范文。加油啊。