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　　My View on Reform of Mediacal Care in China
     
　　At present,there are some problems in medical system of our country ,just likes the cost of diseases which is spent in hospital is higher than before and the problem that which is hard to see the doctors.
    
　　What make those probem?First,the number of hospitals、doctors and nurses is limit in our country,so when you want to go to the hospital and get any therapy,you must wait for a long time.The second,the salary of the medical members is too low,and the salary of them is associated to the price of the medicine,the more expensive medicine they prescribe ,the more money they get.

　　To deal with those problems,I have some ideas of the reform of medical care .First,we can built more hospital,allow the private enterprises to come into the field of medical.The second, cut off the association between the income of medical members and the price of medicine,set up the law to beat the bribery from the medicine,improve the income of the medical members.

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