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　　My View on Reform of Medical Care in China
    
　　There is no denying the fact that medical care has play an increasing role in our daily lives.But at the same time there are many problems about medical care,for example, the heavy cost of medical care and the difficulty of seeing a doctor.
    
　　A number of factors could acount for the problems,but the following are the most critical ones.At the first place,the increasing of medical care could not catch up with the population explosion espcially in the countryside where the productions mainly depend on the manpower.At the second place,since the medical resource could not keep the balance among the different districts.This differerce between the city and the coutry is particularly obvious.At last but not least, many people who are poor do not have extra money to buy medical insurance,so they do not want to see a doctor at the first time when they are ill,.
    
　　In view of the seriousness of the problems,effctive measures must be taken before things get worse.For one thing,the states should train more doctors to meet the need of the population.For the other thing,the state should put more money on the building of the medical insurance.With these measures taken, it is reasonable for us to expect a brighter future.

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