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　　The Robot Is a Machine after All

　　The robots are more and more clever ,thus they can do many things as well as people ,even better than us. However  the robot is a machine after all.

　　For example , the robot can compete with people in playing card  and chess. The robot is so clever that people can’t win it at first. When people open the robot’s body and regulate it’s program to reduce its intelligence.,then the same competion is proceeding ,the robot will lose the game.

　　From  above example , we can include  that  the robots are  machines after all ,they are produced  by people , controlled  by people.  So if we  utility  them  by  suitable  means  ,they  can  do  many  things  instead  of  human beings,  thus  people  can  release  from  the  dagouruos  and  harmful  works.

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