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不管是雅思A類還是G類,兩篇作文都更加側(cè)重大作文,即大作文所占的分值更多,決定了最后的寫作分?jǐn)?shù),因此,再考前沖刺階段,60-70%的精力應(yīng)該放在大作文上。 1。作文結(jié)構(gòu) 具體操作如下: 第一段:兩部分內(nèi)容:1)restatement of the topic。改寫題目,或者說介紹一下與題目相關(guān)的背景,引入話題。這一部分要做到兩個(gè)要求:a. 不能照抄原題!包括不能只改寫原題中的幾個(gè)字,一定要整個(gè)句型結(jié)構(gòu)、措辭都改掉,這樣才是符合要求的。b.不要太冗長。這個(gè)不是學(xué)術(shù)論文,盡管有些英語水平很高的同學(xué)可以通過長篇大論把問題分析得更清楚,英語水平炫耀得更淋漓盡致,但是雅思大作文不要求也不提倡這么寫!!所以2句話,概括一下相關(guān)背景即可。2)表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。一般直接地、明確地表達(dá)出自己的觀點(diǎn)即可,不要繞很多圈子,一句話足矣。 總結(jié):第一段一般寫3句話即可,前兩句介紹引入話題,最后一句明確地表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn),總字?jǐn)?shù)在40詞左右為宜。 第二段:這段被稱之為讓步段,即分析自己所不贊成的觀點(diǎn)。比如:題目問是否應(yīng)該用動(dòng)物做實(shí)驗(yàn)?你的觀點(diǎn)是應(yīng)該用動(dòng)物做實(shí)驗(yàn),則此段中先分析不應(yīng)該用動(dòng)物做實(shí)驗(yàn)的觀點(diǎn),主要是分析其不合理性。 第三段至第四段。正面地支持自己的觀點(diǎn)。即為什么你覺得應(yīng)該用動(dòng)物做實(shí)驗(yàn)。 總結(jié):第二段至第三段的主題句都放在第一句。后面為支持句,一般寫4-5句,每段總字?jǐn)?shù)在70詞左右為宜。 第五段(最后一段):總結(jié)自己的觀點(diǎn),或者總結(jié)正文段的大致內(nèi)容。此段有兩個(gè)要點(diǎn):1)不要照抄第一段的觀點(diǎn)(觀點(diǎn)是一樣的,但是表達(dá)不能一樣);2)不要自相矛盾。不要第一段說應(yīng)該用動(dòng)物做實(shí)驗(yàn),到了最后一段又說用動(dòng)物做實(shí)驗(yàn)弊端很多,這樣就自相矛盾了。! 總結(jié):最后一段寫2-3句話為宜,總字?jǐn)?shù)達(dá)30詞左右即可。 總結(jié)之總結(jié):全文共5段,首尾段比較容易把握,主要是表達(dá)觀點(diǎn),注意減少語法錯(cuò)誤,要給考官留下不錯(cuò)的第一印象。不要想太多,不要搞太多“噱頭”和“創(chuàng)新”。正文段不僅要清楚地論證自己的觀點(diǎn),而且要炫耀一下語言,作文的分?jǐn)?shù)高低主要就是在正文段。! 2。寫作的語言 句型結(jié)構(gòu)方面:要有復(fù)雜句,如從句(這是基本的,6分的作文還是要的),非謂語動(dòng)詞作定語、狀語、獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)(這是7,8分要的),倒裝句(7,8分要的),強(qiáng)調(diào)句(6分的也可以用用,比較好用),被動(dòng)語態(tài)(這個(gè)地球人都要會(huì)用),同位語(7,8要的,6分么也可以用用),插入語(7,8分要的,感覺會(huì)很好)等等。 詞匯:中國學(xué)生往往對(duì)詞匯的理解有個(gè)誤區(qū)!。】傆X得,詞用的越難越好,這是大錯(cuò)特錯(cuò)。!去看看劍橋系列從書所提供的例文,沒有一篇考官寫的例文是用了很多難詞的。詞匯主要是強(qiáng)調(diào)多樣性,即表達(dá)同一個(gè)意思,不要重復(fù)同樣的表達(dá)方式。比如:要說某某事很重要,第一次如果用了important,第二次就不能再說了,可以換些表達(dá),如significant, of great importance, have priority over...等等,這樣表達(dá)的方式就多樣了,考官就開心了,分?jǐn)?shù)就高了。 3。練習(xí)的題目 好了,由于篇幅原因,就寫到這里了。 一下提供一篇應(yīng)試性的例文: Many old buildings are protected by law because they are part of a nation’s history. However, some people think that they should be knocked down to make way for new ones because people need houses and offices. How important is it to maintain old buildings? Should history stand in the way of progress? Laws are enacted in many countries to protect old buildings; however the authorities may neglect that some old buildings hinder the development of new buildings such as houses and offices. Therefore, I’m strongly convinced that maintenance of old buildings, if standing in the way of progress, should not be supported.(51words) There is no doubt that it is of paramount importance to maintain old buildings because they are part of a nation’s history. All the countries attach great importance to the value of history and they encourage people to learn from history which furnishes us with rich experiences of failure and success.(51words) Nevertheless, lingering over the past --- history --- is far from enough. It is true that we can learn a lot from history but this is only part of what we need to learn. We must realize that not all the old buildings are valuable. There are many ramshackle buildings that are worthless and stand in the way of progress. In that case, we should pull them down to make way for better ones without any hesitation.(77words) A wise decision, it would seem, is to single out valuable old buildings and protect them but as for valueless ones we have no choice but to put them down. Science and technology is developing at an amazing rate, thus creating an increasing demand for laboratories, offices and the like. Obviously, it would be silly to protect the valueless old buildings at the cost of further developing what is more valuable and beneficial.(73words) Overall, it is vital to maintain old buildings but it does not mean they can hamper our development. Consequently, it would be wiser to protect the valuable ones and utilize them to create a better future.(36words) 如果覺得例文比較難把握,那么嘗試著先看一下每一段的主題句,這樣會(huì)不會(huì)更清楚些呢 |
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